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Mini Vs Void WIP

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How about that 3 point perspective and that pose?! Gotta love it!

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Your presective is WAY off. you have broken the first rule.

Rule #1: Objects that are closer appear bigger.
looking at it, Void is closer to the camera and thus should be bigger,
Right now, Mini's fist is bigger then Voids head.

There is no horizon line and thus the characters are not grounded

Rule #2: Parallel lines intersect at the horizon.
you don't even have a horizon line so i cannot register what is going on with red your lines. The parallel lines refer to real life lines. I know this may sound confusing to you so i will give you a link.


This will help>>> [link]